Granular feedback on drafts without rewriting. Generates highlighted HTML with click-to-reveal inline comments...
Generate highlighted HTML with click-to-reveal comments for granular feedback on text. Alternative to rewrites—user keeps their voice, reviews feedback incrementally.
Use AskUserQuestion to clarify scope when the request is ambiguous. Avoid over-commenting (overwhelming) or under-commenting (missing the point).
Clarify when:
Skip clarification when:
Example clarification:
User: "comment on this"
[long doc, no lens specified]
→ Use AskUserQuestion:
"What should I focus on?"
Options:
- "Editor feedback (structure, clarity, word choice)"
- "Recipient POV (how [person] would react)"
- "Specific angle (tell me what)"
| Lens | Color | Comment style |
|---|---|---|
| Editor | Yellow (#fff3cd) | observations, suggestions: "weak opener", "add proof here" |
| POV (as person) | Blue (#e3f2fd) | reactions from that person's perspective: "i know this already", "legal would freak out" |
| Focused | Yellow | specific angle only: "word choice", "tone", "weak arguments" |
DO:
_private/views/{name}-comments-temp.htmlopen _private/views/{name}-comments-temp.htmlDO NOT:
<!DOCTYPE html>
<html lang="en">
<head>
<meta charset="UTF-8">
<meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0">
<title>{title}</title>
<style>
* { box-sizing: border-box; }
body {
font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, 'Segoe UI', Roboto, sans-serif;
max-width: 700px;
margin: 0 auto;
padding: 40px 20px;
line-height: 1.7;
color: #1a1a1a;
background: #fafafa;
}
h1, h2, h3 { margin-top: 2em; font-weight: 600; }
h1 { font-size: 1.4em; }
h2 { font-size: 1.2em; color: #333; }
p { margin: 1em 0; }
.highlight {
background: {highlight-bg}; /* #fff3cd yellow for editor, #e3f2fd blue for POV */
padding: 1px 4px;
border-radius: 3px;
cursor: pointer;
border-bottom: 2px solid {highlight-border}; /* #ffc107 for editor, #2196f3 for POV */
transition: background 0.15s;
}
.highlight:hover, .highlight.active {
background: {highlight-hover}; /* #ffe69c for editor, #bbdefb for POV */
}
.comment {
display: none;
background: {comment-bg}; /* #1a1a1a for editor, #0052cc for POV */
color: #fff;
padding: 8px 12px;
border-radius: 6px;
font-size: 0.85em;
margin: 8px 0;
line-height: 1.5;
}
.comment.show { display: block; }
.section-break {
border: none;
border-top: 1px solid #ddd;
margin: 2em 0;
}
.legend {
position: fixed;
bottom: 20px;
right: 20px;
background: #fff;
padding: 12px 16px;
border-radius: 8px;
box-shadow: 0 2px 12px rgba(0,0,0,0.1);
font-size: 0.8em;
color: #666;
}
</style>
</head>
<body>
{content with <span class="highlight" data-comment="comment text">highlighted phrase</span>}
<div class="legend">{count} comments · click highlights to reveal</div>
<script>
document.querySelectorAll('.highlight').forEach(el => {
const commentText = el.getAttribute('data-comment');
const commentDiv = document.createElement('div');
commentDiv.className = 'comment';
commentDiv.textContent = commentText;
el.insertAdjacentElement('afterend', commentDiv);
el.addEventListener('click', () => {
const wasActive = el.classList.contains('active');
document.querySelectorAll('.highlight').forEach(h => h.classList.remove('active'));
document.querySelectorAll('.comment').forEach(c => c.classList.remove('show'));
if (!wasActive) {
el.classList.add('active');
commentDiv.classList.add('show');
}
});
});
</script>
</body>
</html>
Editor lens (yellow):
.highlight { background: #fff3cd; border-bottom: 2px solid #ffc107; }
.highlight:hover, .highlight.active { background: #ffe69c; }
.comment { background: #1a1a1a; }
POV lens (blue):
.highlight { background: #e3f2fd; border-bottom: 2px solid #2196f3; }
.highlight:hover, .highlight.active { background: #bbdefb; }
.comment { background: #0052cc; }
data-comment attributes_private/views/{name}-comments-temp.htmlopen _private/views/{name}-comments-temp.htmlEditor lens:
User: "comment on this, focus on word choice"
→ Yellow highlights, suggestions like "vague, try 'specifically'" or "jargon, simplify"
POV lens:
User: "comment on this as brian would react"
→ Blue highlights, reactions like "i already know this" or "legal would push back here"
Focused lens:
User: "leave comments on this, only flag weak arguments"
→ Yellow highlights on weak claims, comments like "needs evidence" or "assumes too much"
Sparse/sharp lens:
User: "comment only where there's an obvious fix"
→ Minimal highlights, only typos, missing words, or clear improvements
