Use after drafting positioning statements, before writing website copy, or when marketing language sounds corporate rather than human
A role-play exercise to ensure positioning statements sound like human conversation rather than corporate jargon. If you can't explain what you do to a friend at a bar, you have a positioning problem.
Core principle: Positioning must be colloquial enough to say to a friend.
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ā STEP 1: SET THE SCENE ā
ā Imagine you're at a bar with your target persona ā
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ā STEP 2: THE TRIGGER ā
ā "Hey, I just started using [Product]..." ā
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ā STEP 3: THE EXPLANATION ā
ā Speak the Benefit + Category naturally ā
ā Structure: What is it + Benefit + Differentiator ā
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ā STEP 4: THE VALIDATION ā
ā Does the friend nod, or ask "What do you mean?" ā
ā If they ask for clarification ā Test FAILED ā
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| ā Human (Pass) | ā Corporate (Fail) |
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| "Turns your iPad into a cash register" | "Leverages tablet hardware for merchant transactions" |
| "Notes that write themselves" | "AI-powered documentation solution" |
| "Your company's search engine" | "Enterprise knowledge management platform" |
Words people don't speak aloud:
Source: Arielle Jackson (First Round Capital) via Lenny's Podcast